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Andromida syndrome - Part 2 by ~acidshadow:iconacidshadow:





THIS IS NOT THE FULL STORY!!! To download full version, please go to the download link in the DESCRPTION please. Much thanks. <3

  Chapter 2 of ‘A tale of two light-years’ - "Andromida Syndrome"- Part 1
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Evening had fallen on the desert planet- giving soft relief to its inhabitants.

Shadow was sitting in a bar that looked more like an old shack with extensions, but the prices were cheap here. The air was humid within the bar despite the fact the searing sun had long since gone.
Behind her- a game of poker was being played, with the players becoming more desperate and throwing in higher and higher winnings. To her left- some merchants were discussing a share in each other’s business, whilst a large majority were watching 'Nicky' - a human female stripper in the other room, who was dancing to some strange club mix that sounded like a dying crocodile over a fast beat. The others in the bar room were as lonely looking as Shadow.

"Another?" asked the rough voice of the barkeeper looking at Shadow.
Shadow wasn't too sure what species this guy was. He resembled a human- but he was very large, and his nose looked like it should have been a horn, and his finger tips were like stubby horny-toes. Maybe there was a rhinoceros-kin somewhere down the line? Or maybe he was just old and seen better times.
"Please" Shadow nodded.
"Yer sure? "
" It’s only my fourth..."
"Aye- Normally I wouldn’t miond- but that’s battery-acid that yer drinking lass!" He pointed out as the passed her down another pint of a suspiciously glowing yellow drink. "Rots yer brain that stuff does!"
"I can handle it. Besides, I kinda need to forget things..." Shadow said softly. "Some things are best not knowing- you know?" She added.
"Oh aye...had a rough few days lass?"
"A rough life. But things should have been getting better. I don't know..." she just shrugged. "I'm just lost and...” she sighed. “... Lonely... I guess. I have a lot of questions…some may not be answered."
The bartender nodded as if he heard it all before, from each person who wondered into his small bar from all corners of the universe. As the bartender turned towards the 'kitchen' (which looked more like toxic waste patch) he gave Shadow a smile and passed her some dusty old wisdom.
“ Life has its doon sides, but as moi ma’ always said ‘life is to wide and too deep to spend it questioning yer existence.’ You’ll find your place lass, don't cha worry!” Shadow chuckled.
"Yeah...thank your mum for me, will you?"

Shadow decided that this old piece of wisdom might be right. She thought about all the bits of information she had gained and what she had learnt over the last few days. She thought about her friends and her life she had lived so far. But more importantly- the questions she had asked, and the frustration of the queens voice in her head. The desert coloured angel was now wondering if some of those questions she might not have wanted answered. Could she continue her life alone in ignorance and try to ignore what she was? Or accept her 'fate'- a word she didn't like believing in.

She picked up the glass of surprisingly bright yellow liquid and moved to the other end of the bar near the only window inside it. As she gazed at the night sky, and the strange flying sand whales that were dancing across the dunes once again, she started to drink her fifth ‘acid-tyle’ drink.
She just needed one more good reason to go.
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THIS IS NOT THE FULL STORY!!! To download full version, please go to the download link in the DESCRPTION please. Much thanks. <3
©2007-2009 ~acidshadow
:iconacidshadow:

Author's Comments

To downlaod the FULL version of part 2- please download from this link:
[link]

IF THE LINK NO LONGER WORKS FOR YOU- PLEASE NOTE ME.

DA didn't like the size of the our story and we didn't want to cut it up into loads of different bits.

Here it is finally; Chapter 2 of 'A tale of two light years'. A collaboration story between me and :iconscifer:

The order goes like this:

Here's Part 1 (souls apart) - Chapter 1 (Shadow's story) : [link]
And Chapter 2(Sciren's story) : [link]

This is part 2 (Andromida syndrome).

So, for those of you too busy/lazy to read the Part 1's of me and scifer's story- here's what has happened so far (although it is recommended that you read the part 1's in order to understand exactly what’s going on):

This is a story that follows two creatures on their quest for answers in a world that seems guided by fate.

The story surrounds two characters- Shadow and Sciren. They're both hybrid clones, both built from a mysterious alien DNA, both build for war, both controlled by an 'instinct' that drives them to destroy and kill, both who have their instincts 'talk' to them.

Two lost souls desperately seeking answers, freedom from their 'instinct'.

Our first character- Shadow- is a creature who has traveled all parts of this universe. She has seen many wars and slowly gained freedom for her clones from the fascist dictator; Horus. But since then- Her tribe of clones have since scattered or passed on, and only she remains along with her memories. If this wasn't bad enough- her 'instinct' starts kicking in again, telling her to go kill again.
In her frustration- some friends tell her to visit a worm temple on a sandy planet of Sierra in hopes of her finding inner peace.

She gets more then she bargained for when she stumbles on a map that seems to point to the answers she seeks...

Our Second character - Sciren, is trapped in a mundane loop in his life of mending broken machinery. He has always felt a connection with machines. Could it be something to do with his genetic roots as a half-Seta? When a mysterious stranger encounters Sciren, he is compelled to find out more about her. Fate seems to be pulling both of them together. But why?

Sciren is soon to find out that while their fates may be entwined, they are very different people.


So, yeah- prepare for a story packed full of action, mystery and two lost souls- 'A tale of two light years' - Andromida syndrome.


oh- side note, the breaks either represent a change of authour (Me or scifer) or a change of scene. confusing- I know.

Sciren and seta copyrighted to :iconscifer: (seta shared with amber)
Shadow and the universe copyrighted to me.
Please DO NOT use our charecters in other stories or RP's without our permission. We've already had problems with that.

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I love it i love it love love hearts spades clubs and diamonds <3<3<3<3<3<3<3
I mean like.. fuxxor mew! you wrote that so damn well I look at my own scribbles like *shock* D: but then I'm also eeling influenced by this
Also, fuxxor mew! I love how you two can come up with a atory like this and stuff and the telling is amazing and good you told that the breaks change view otherwise I' would had have much slower start.
I read this in last, what, five hours? ate a little, was supposed to tale the dog out an hour ago but I didn't want to stop! otherwise I would have lost the intensity of this :ohnoes:
and I WNAT THE SEQUEL LATER! HAHA GOTCHA! THOUGHT I WAS GOING TO SAY NOW BUT NO! BECAUSE IF I READ IT NOW MY HEAD WOULD EXPLODE SO I NEED TRIME TO DEAL WITH THIS AMOUNT OF WONDERFULNESS! OH GOD I CAN SEE FOREVER! :heart:


I apologise the excessive amount of exclamation mark and caps lock usage and lack of sense....

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If you were a bomb, and you were thrown up, would you explode?
:iconacidshadow:
Awww! thnaks you so much for the nice comment sweetie! Sriously, you do not know how much it means to us to know that you read the whole thing, loved it and that it inspired you. :3 That sort of comment keeps us wanting to upload these stories you know!

And don't worry, Part 3 is alost finished! We just have to edit it and draw the preview pic after that. :3

Thankyou once again for the very nice comment sweetie. <3

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:iconblackaeronaut:
This looks full of niftiness. I likes. ^_^ FAVE.

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:iconacidshadow:
Thnaks! glad you like it!

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Oh, did you get to download the story at all? I know the download has died since.

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I haven't read it because I want to read the full version, but like you said above, the download is dead is there anywhere else that has the full version?

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'If you keep my secret this strawberry will be yours!' - L

[link] This One Is On Us : NIN
:iconblackaeronaut:
Not yet. Been kinda busy as of late. :(

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"To the commissary we should go," Yoda declared firmly. "News of this kind a danish requires."
:iconacidshadow:
Thats okies, it's kinda down anyways. Want me to note you when the download is back up so you cna save it for later?

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Ah yeah, i gotta sort that out. unfortunately, i don't have the file here. Hmmm...Give me a few days and i'll note you when I re-upload it. You'll ahve to grab it fast. Itll eitehr be this weekend or next.

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